I tryed joiplay and it sadly doesn't work for me (I'm new to joiplay so if there are tips I welcome them), but I will give it a go once my pc works again
Yeah IL devenetly wait for that I used to ask if a android version is bland but alot of times I Don get a answer or I get a angry one so I try joyplai first now
I'm unsure if this is an AI think, but sometimes the characters or screen looks weirdly stretched, still I plan on giving this a real chance and not stop there.
I believe one was with the potion maker, I believe the one were she was sitting in the middle or her herbs and the other one was one where the main char talked with (the blond girl), there their heads looked a bit squished I believe, so for now still pretty much in the beginning.
I randomly started a scene with the port girl, it looks like he is standing ther moving his hips with his arms paralyzed at least they looked a bit useless
You've described everything exactly as it is, but don't forget. I'm a beginner, and by the end of the game, all animations will return to normal. It's all about experience. There are still quite a few such things ahead xD
Honestly was not expecting such an interesting and well-planned out story. A lot of time stories can end up feeling so disjointed, but I can tell a lot of thought was put into how things would make sense, fit together, and one thing leading into the other. Obviously, there's a bit of stuff getting lost in translation due to the nature of machine translation, but I've seen a lot of games with way worse translation issues.
My favorite character has to be Captain Lexi, with Sue following close behind. Her questline really sold me on this game. I was so happy to see her showing up in Chapter 1 and her not just being limited to a sidequest character, but actually part of the main group.
Though there were some translation issues that popped up during the second quest with her that made me think you were going for a "Anne Bonny" reference (as in, a woman who disguises herself as a man), but I suspect the "misgendering" stuff is simply the machine translation going wonky (I can get some screenshots of this if you wish to correct them.)
The primary issues I noticed in the early game, aside from some assorted translation issues, was that the early animated scenes in the prologue seemed to be done with different AI Gen model compared to the ones in Chapter 1. I hope you eventually go back and re-do those scenes with the current model you use!
My main other issue is the combat. Frankly, it's just not that great. Especially the sheer length of time the encounters take and the numerous bugs. Of the three fights currently in the game (I wouldn't count the arena as a fight), two ended with Welt dead with the other character having negative value numbers of MP (and MP wasn't even visible in one of these fights). The health bar also does NOT show an accurate amount of remaining health.
Personally, I think the entire combat system needs a massive re-work, though a quick "fix" right now would be increasing the damage that both Welt and his companions can do with their attacks, if only to speed up how long these fights can take.
Thank you very much for your comment! I am currently thinking about how to rework the animations from the prologue (I even found an animator for this) I think I will change the animations by the release of the full version. As for the fights, of course I will collect information from your comments and make it a little simpler. It's good that you haven't seen the fight with the spider-girl yet))))))
(By the way, about Lexi, she's also my favorite. There will be a big story with her.)
Thank you in any case, it is very important to me.
the Arena fight with Draco feels like it might be more fitting as a pure story event and not gameplay. But one idea for improving it would be to keep it uniform with the other fights in the game. I also think it would be a good example fight to so the player what fighting against someone with a Spiritualized/Liberated weapon is like (though I think you might have had it mind that Draco/Drago was intentionally holding back?). I see it like the player has access to Wound Mend at the start, but the first attack Draco uses drains the player's MP and does takes 1/3 of their health, then he does 2 more special attacks after that, also showing them off. I don't know if you play on Welt facing him in combat again, but it would be cool to get a preview of his abilities like that.
One thing I'm wondering is if all the player's friends/wards/companions are going to have similar tasks and quests like the one Welt and Anastasia go on?
Really interesting as a visual novel, the only part not translated into English I found in the character of Evelyn (later in the story) but apart from that I liked it.
Just to understand better, does the current version go up to obtaining the mansion or is there more further ahead?
I'm stuck with the list on the sheet, the "manager" character (to avoid spoilers) asks me to come back in a few days to give me an estimate of the cost but I tried everything and the story doesn't continue.
Thanks for the review bro, yes. At the moment when the goblin asks to come back in a couple of days, the game stops. I almost had version 0.1.1a ready, but I understand that due to the large number of bugs, I will postpone the update for a couple of weeks. But I'll also post the next update for free here.
If you find any errors, please write to discord.π·
Also visiting sectarian camp (the cult of the dead) and talk/look on hole before everything bug entire game and you can't do anything except scroll to pass this one and play in the normal order.
Anyway the game have multiple bugs right now, but is pointless to post them all here, because you can't see everything happend before to know where is the issue.
Bro, if you can, then write all the mistakes in the discord to me. It is very important to correct them. I really can't notice them all. Thank you very much.
Hey Alisindra, When I go into the settings menu during gameplay and lower the music slider to turn just the music down, It seems to turn both the sound and voice down as well and not individually. Could you check on this please, It might just be my computer being daft but I thought I'd let you know. Take Care.
Hey as long as it's still possible can you make a download for the itch.io app? I don't know I might be wrong but it feels saver and it just does it's own thing.
oh and if you sell it, sell it here to please, can't buy it on steam because of missing age stuff and all that, some weird reasons.
Yes, I will be posting new updates here yet. To at least correct the mistakes and advance the plot a little. So don't worry, and thanks for the feedback. =)
I'll do that bro. I will also sell here as in steam when the time comes.π·
Hey Alisindra, It's great that you've put so much effort into the game and so far it looks great, and everyone has to start somewhere. I believe you'll become a great Developer, Keep it up. All the best.
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I tryed joiplay and it sadly doesn't work for me (I'm new to joiplay so if there are tips I welcome them), but I will give it a go once my pc works again
I'm a little confused about what's wrong with our game. But I hope you can do it!π
Nothing joiplay is used as a port so you can play windows games on your phone but it doesn't work with everything
Oh, I didn't know about that. Maybe you should wait for the android version then? I am also planning it in the near future. =)
Yeah IL devenetly wait for that I used to ask if a android version is bland but alot of times I Don get a answer or I get a angry one so I try joyplai first now
Oh, OK.π€
For some reason the game is stuck in Russian and i cant find a setting to change it to english
Yes, that's my fault. Sorry. You can change the language in the settings by turning the mouse wheel down.
no offense but i think i'll wait til translations, the pictures look good though
Thank you, I hope to find a translator for the release so that it's not just a Google Translate.
when you do, i could look over them to make sure the translations are in proper English
That would be wonderful!π€
Thank you! I found that setting and its already helped immensely :)
Great!πππ
I'm unsure if this is an AI think, but sometimes the characters or screen looks weirdly stretched, still I plan on giving this a real chance and not stop there.
Tell me where they are stretched, maybe I can fix it.
I believe one was with the potion maker, I believe the one were she was sitting in the middle or her herbs and the other one was one where the main char talked with (the blond girl), there their heads looked a bit squished I believe, so for now still pretty much in the beginning.
Okay, I'll take a look. =)
I randomly started a scene with the port girl, it looks like he is standing ther moving his hips with his arms paralyzed at least they looked a bit useless
You've described everything exactly as it is, but don't forget. I'm a beginner, and by the end of the game, all animations will return to normal. It's all about experience. There are still quite a few such things ahead xD
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Honestly was not expecting such an interesting and well-planned out story. A lot of time stories can end up feeling so disjointed, but I can tell a lot of thought was put into how things would make sense, fit together, and one thing leading into the other. Obviously, there's a bit of stuff getting lost in translation due to the nature of machine translation, but I've seen a lot of games with way worse translation issues.
My favorite character has to be Captain Lexi, with Sue following close behind. Her questline really sold me on this game. I was so happy to see her showing up in Chapter 1 and her not just being limited to a sidequest character, but actually part of the main group.
Though there were some translation issues that popped up during the second quest with her that made me think you were going for a "Anne Bonny" reference (as in, a woman who disguises herself as a man), but I suspect the "misgendering" stuff is simply the machine translation going wonky (I can get some screenshots of this if you wish to correct them.)
The primary issues I noticed in the early game, aside from some assorted translation issues, was that the early animated scenes in the prologue seemed to be done with different AI Gen model compared to the ones in Chapter 1. I hope you eventually go back and re-do those scenes with the current model you use!
My main other issue is the combat. Frankly, it's just not that great. Especially the sheer length of time the encounters take and the numerous bugs. Of the three fights currently in the game (I wouldn't count the arena as a fight), two ended with Welt dead with the other character having negative value numbers of MP (and MP wasn't even visible in one of these fights). The health bar also does NOT show an accurate amount of remaining health.
Personally, I think the entire combat system needs a massive re-work, though a quick "fix" right now would be increasing the damage that both Welt and his companions can do with their attacks, if only to speed up how long these fights can take.
Thank you very much for your comment! I am currently thinking about how to rework the animations from the prologue (I even found an animator for this) I think I will change the animations by the release of the full version. As for the fights, of course I will collect information from your comments and make it a little simpler. It's good that you haven't seen the fight with the spider-girl yet))))))
(By the way, about Lexi, she's also my favorite. There will be a big story with her.)
Thank you in any case, it is very important to me.
the Arena fight with Draco feels like it might be more fitting as a pure story event and not gameplay. But one idea for improving it would be to keep it uniform with the other fights in the game. I also think it would be a good example fight to so the player what fighting against someone with a Spiritualized/Liberated weapon is like (though I think you might have had it mind that Draco/Drago was intentionally holding back?). I see it like the player has access to Wound Mend at the start, but the first attack Draco uses drains the player's MP and does takes 1/3 of their health, then he does 2 more special attacks after that, also showing them off. I don't know if you play on Welt facing him in combat again, but it would be cool to get a preview of his abilities like that.
One thing I'm wondering is if all the player's friends/wards/companions are going to have similar tasks and quests like the one Welt and Anastasia go on?
Yes, all companions will have such quests. As for Welt, he will soon receive his first spiritual weapon. I want to gradually develop his abilities =)
Really interesting as a visual novel, the only part not translated into English I found in the character of Evelyn (later in the story) but apart from that I liked it.
Just to understand better, does the current version go up to obtaining the mansion or is there more further ahead?
I'm stuck with the list on the sheet, the "manager" character (to avoid spoilers) asks me to come back in a few days to give me an estimate of the cost but I tried everything and the story doesn't continue.
Thanks for the review bro, yes. At the moment when the goblin asks to come back in a couple of days, the game stops. I almost had version 0.1.1a ready, but I understand that due to the large number of bugs, I will postpone the update for a couple of weeks. But I'll also post the next update for free here.
If you find any errors, please write to discord.π·
Honestly I didn't find any bugs, maybe I was lucky or I didn't notice them anyway thanks for the confirmation. :)
I think you're a very lucky person, because I've had a lot of bug reports in discord. xD
Just to know game is still half English, half Rusian.
Also visiting sectarian camp (the cult of the dead) and talk/look on hole before everything bug entire game and you can't do anything except scroll to pass this one and play in the normal order.
Oh, thanks for writing. I will fix this as soon as possible and post an update.π
Anyway the game have multiple bugs right now, but is pointless to post them all here, because you can't see everything happend before to know where is the issue.
Bro, if you can, then write all the mistakes in the discord to me. It is very important to correct them. I really can't notice them all. Thank you very much.
Hey Alisindra, When I go into the settings menu during gameplay and lower the music slider to turn just the music down, It seems to turn both the sound and voice down as well and not individually. Could you check on this please, It might just be my computer being daft but I thought I'd let you know. Take Care.
Okay, I'll check it out. Thanks for writing. There may be many other things wrong in the game, I will fix everything with patches over time =)
Hey as long as it's still possible can you make a download for the itch.io app? I don't know I might be wrong but it feels saver and it just does it's own thing.
oh and if you sell it, sell it here to please, can't buy it on steam because of missing age stuff and all that, some weird reasons.
Yes, I will be posting new updates here yet. To at least correct the mistakes and advance the plot a little. So don't worry, and thanks for the feedback. =)
I'll do that bro. I will also sell here as in steam when the time comes.π·
I want to add something but someone seems to have seen my comment already so a new one.
The normal download felt, the first time I remember seeing that, so I just wait for now.
Do you mean that you can't download the game now?π€
oopps yes I meant I suddenly read download failed when I took a look I only tried it once so far.
Downloading with the app now.
That worked
Cool =)
Looks like a promising game. Good luck!
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Hey Alisindra, It's great that you've put so much effort into the game and so far it looks great, and everyone has to start somewhere. I believe you'll become a great Developer, Keep it up. All the best.
Thank you very much, you can't imagine how important these words are to me!πππ
Glad to see you, we're waiting for the Android version.
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I've been following your project for a long time, I hope everything will stabilize for youπ
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